I am a Year 6 student at Papakura Central School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 4 and my teacher is Mrs Paniora.
PatrickThat was a great story I guess your mum is really nice. This reminds me of my mum. You should work on making your story longer.
Hi it's me Harmanthanks for the feedback maybe i should make my story's more longer.
Hi Harman I am from Glen Taylor school this is a really nice story, your mum sounds like a very kind and loving mum.
Hi Harman I am from Glen Taylor school your post about your mothers day is nice.
Patrick
ReplyDeleteThat was a great story I guess your mum is really nice. This reminds me of my mum. You should work on making your story longer.
Hi it's me Harman
ReplyDeletethanks for the feedback maybe i should make my story's more longer.
Hi Harman I am from Glen Taylor school this is a really nice story, your mum sounds like a very kind and loving mum.
ReplyDeleteHi Harman I am from Glen Taylor school your post about your mothers day is nice.
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